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5.5 Leads and Second Paragraphs 2
Posted on February 20th, 2010 at 5:17 pm by and

Protest

Lead: Wilbur Straking plans to lead a group of 25 dedicated Christians to the state capital next Monday to object to evolution being taught in the University biology class.

Second Paragraph: Wilbur Straking is a pastor at the Ever-Faithful Church of the Living Water. While leading students to the capital, they intend on speaking with legislators about their concerns with teaching that go against the principles of the Christian country. In their trip, they hope to put a stop to Laura Cliff, an associate biology professor’s evolution teachings. Laura and the university president both refused to comment on the group’s charges.



Comments so far:

  1. Link Here | February 24, 2010,

    Probably jamming too much into your second graf. On second reference he is just “Straking.” Some grammatical errors. This should probably be a blind lead — his name isn’t as important as who he is. 3/5.

    dkois

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