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Three Issues With My Writing
Posted on May 6th, 2010 at 7:51 am by and

As a writer, I am not perfect and am only human, which means I am bound to make mistakes. I have noticed three mistakes that I repeatedly keep making and hope that this realization will help me make the necessary changes in my writing to make it better. 1. Capitalization of brands Examples from Quiz […]

Exercise 11.1 Press Release-YMCA
Posted on April 26th, 2010 at 10:12 pm by and

I recently wrote  a press release for a local YMCA as an assignment. The location was not specific so I decided to use the Hunterdon County YMCA. This seemed like the most relevant location to choose because I worked there for 3 years as a lifeguard and swim instructor and felt a natural attachment to […]

Pantha Du Prince: Techno Music A Rock Fan Can Love
Posted on April 7th, 2010 at 9:45 pm by and

Today I listened to a news story on NPR’s All Things Considered called Pantha Du Prince: Techno Music A Rock Fan Can Love. This story was to highlight the German producer’s latest production, “Black Noise.” A woman introduces the story by stating that an audience for indie rock and techno don’t mix. Michaelangelo Matos tells […]

Web Package
Posted on March 31st, 2010 at 9:49 pm by and

I found this web package in the Arts section of the New York Times. It is of a retired dancer, Anne Bass who chooses to dance again once her daughters started and and upon being too tired she decides to make the dance film, “Dancing Across Borders” with a young Cambodian boy. http://www.nytimes.com/2010/03/21/movies/21bass.html?ref=dance Elements of […]

Exercise 5.10 Re-write
Posted on March 29th, 2010 at 10:50 pm by and

Immediate suspension is to occur for any fraternity member possessing alcohol with the reinstatement of the policy banning alcohol from fraternity houses. Two weeks ago, University President Harvey Smithville restated the policy that, “any fraternity in which the members have alcohol will be immediately suspended. A second offense within a year will result in the […]

5.10 Re-write
Posted on March 1st, 2010 at 8:22 pm by and

There is a recurring issue of fraternities consuming alcohol against the rules of the university and with this issue on the rise, more people are suffering the consequences whether medically or socially. Two weeks ago a ban on alcohol’s presence in fraternity houses on campus property was re-instated. If the policy is violated, immediate suspension […]

Put On A Funny Face
Posted on February 28th, 2010 at 12:41 pm by and

When you log into Facebook it is inevitable to go on the site without noticing an abundance of posts on the live feed wall of your friend’s recent activities. Aside from writing on friend’s walls and posting pictures, users now see events such as “changed profile picture,” however it is to a celebrity or “became […]

Exercise 5.10
Posted on February 24th, 2010 at 10:16 pm by and

Recently, a student from LSU and one from MIT have died from alcohol poisoning. There is a recurring issue of fraternities consuming alcohol against the rules of the university. With this issue on the rise, more people are suffering the consequences whether medically or socially. Two weeks ago a ban on alcohol’s presence in fraternity […]

Leads in Papers
Posted on February 21st, 2010 at 12:29 pm by and

Straight News – Timberlake’s brand brings the road to the runway NEW YORK — William Rast, the contemporary fashion label by Justin Timberlake and longtime friend Trace Ayala, marched a parade of biker styles down the runway at New York Fashion Week Wednesday night in a collection dubbed “New America.” Anecdotal – Win a medal. Now […]

5.5 Leads and Second Paragraphs 2
Posted on February 20th, 2010 at 5:17 pm by and

Protest Lead: Wilbur Straking plans to lead a group of 25 dedicated Christians to the state capital next Monday to object to evolution being taught in the University biology class. Second Paragraph: Wilbur Straking is a pastor at the Ever-Faithful Church of the Living Water. While leading students to the capital, they intend on speaking with […]

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